Task2_The widespread use of the internet

 

 The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?


The widespread use of the internet lead to several problems. The essay will discuss the major concerns caused by unbelievable sites and some practical solutions.

One of the main problems is that nowadays we have a lot of information from internet, and that is written intentionally by some people who want to make profits from fake website. Therefore, it will affect adults or children who surf internet without cogitation. For example, we have internet banking to help our transaction or activities in bank more convenient while some website is created to cheating on money. Moreover, the fake news is released to make argument in social websites (Facebook, Twister etc.). In order to tackle the problem, people should be aware on the website by observation on its address, or we should referent on the reliable website before we do believe.

Another obvious concern is that children are always online. Some of them become internet addict, so it will harm to their long-term health. For instance, when children play game all day and night, they will lack of sleep. Thus, it will affect their learning efficiency. Furthermore, children who spend time to surf the internet will possibly face obesity and eye problems including short-sighted, eyes stress, and so on rather than children who enjoy outdoor activities. However, that problem will be solved by their parents who need to limit their children time at only 3 hours per day for using the internet. In addition, they should encourage them do outdoor activities.

In conclusion, this essay examines two issues resulting from widespread use of internet: wrong information on unbelievable websites, and overusing internet on children. To address the former, I suggest that people should observe on website address and reliable reference. To solve the latter, I advise parents need to limit their children time to use internet. (310words / 58 mins)

 

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