Do you agree or disagree that competitive sports should not put in school curriculum.

Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people think team and individual sports should remove from the school curriculum. This essay will explain about why I totally disagree about that.

One of the most obvious reasons is that sports, no matter what kind, are good for health. This is because they prevent some serious health problem. First of all, playing sport can prevent obesity in children since they have more chance to do movement activities instead of only sitting in the class room. Moreover, people plays sports may have strong physical body than who do not. For example, students who are team players in football team need to training for improve physical ability. Therefore, it makes their body stronger. Furthermore, playing sports are benefit for mental health. Many researches mention that while we do workout, the brain will release the Endorphin hormone to make our body have more energy. In addition, the hormone has a positive effect to the human brain because it makes sensory neuron feel happiness.

Another reasons is that sports can teach students about their social skills like accepting and forgiving. Mostly, competitive sports have win-loss situation. When students face with fail situation, they will learn how to accept the result. Additionally, there are an accident action during the competitive. For instance, Student may hurt from the opposite player in basketball match, and he do not feel angry on him.

In conclusion, I feel completely disagree that we should place sports in the school subject as there are a number of benefits including improving students healthy, teaching their social skills.   (258words/68mins)😖

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