Argument about music

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 

 

Recently, most people love to listen music that we can obvious from a variety of music styles in our world. Therefore, this essay will discuss about why music is so important for our life. Also, why traditional music in every country more attractive that modern international music.

I certainly sure that everyone has ever been listen to music at less one time. It is because music has a number of benefits. First of all, music is the easiest way to connect and communicate between each other since it has not any age or language barrier. For example, when football match started, the way to merge every team fan club in noisy stadium is singing the team music. Moreover, music can help mental therapy which is using for relaxing and releasing stress. Furthermore, music also helps to improve our memory. For instance, teachers use music for teaching so that it can help their students remember new vocabulary and feeling fun during class. Also, some research claim that people who open music in background while study or work can concentrate better than people who do not. 

Another benefit is that music can keep a different culture for every nation. For example, traditional music can tell us about country history and nation style like a signature. It presents by lyric, melody and tools. When we listen to Chinese music played with Ku-Chen, we will immediately know that it come from China because of their style. Furthermore, Ku-Chen (some kinds of Chinese musical instrument) will inspire us to learn about their culture and history more. In contract, even though modern music mixed and adapted for most population is popular, but it loss a symbol of nation. However, I encourage traditional music inheriting since it is other way to conserve the history.

In conclusion, I think any kind of music is many advantages including connecting people, improving mental health, focusing, and keeping traditional story. Therefore, we should listen continuously. (324 words)

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